Sinkholes
A sinkhole appears in the middle of Winsor middle school. The kids were shocked as they heard a sudden whoosh and after a cracking sound. Then appeared sinkhole in the middle of Winsor middle. This sinkhole appeared Monday, September 11.What caused this sinkhole; it seems to be that excess rain seeped through the ground of the soccer field in Winsor. Hake holes or dolina and cenotes, are different names for sinkhole. Landscapes that are based on limestonetop layer. They are found in most parts of the world. The sinkhole appears sometimes by the falling of a cave roof. The result in this case is a depression in the surface under ground. Sinkholes may appear in the softest of grounds like soil or the hardest like concrete. As interviewing the principal of Winsor middle Mrs. Gates and she said “that the student mites have to change schools”.
The parents as well as the student reacted the same way they had no idea how this happened. Mrs. Fisher the mother of Paul Fisher said “this is a horrible tragedy my kid could have gotten hurt.” Most parents agreed .
October 16th, 2006 at 9:10 am
It’s really good but i think the the title should have more “pop!” to it.
October 16th, 2006 at 2:15 pm
hi hola
October 17th, 2006 at 8:59 am
hey…I like your post on sinkholes but ya i think you should make the title of the story MUCH MUCH better!
*!~AlIcIa~!*
October 17th, 2006 at 9:03 am
hey!! i really like it but i think krystal is rite.it could be better and longer. but other than that its perfect. thanks for inspiring me!!
love u always
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October 17th, 2006 at 9:36 am
I agree with some of the other comments, you should make your tittle diffrent from all the others, you could put it into more detail of the story instead of going into detail of sinkholes. but other then that i enjoyed reading it
October 17th, 2006 at 2:00 pm
I think you did a great job on your questions you put alot of detail on your second question. It was very detailed you even put two ways to say one word. Keep it up!
October 17th, 2006 at 2:13 pm
I also agree with the other comments. But you still did a great job. Keep up with the great work.