ANC Connector 12/15/06
I’ve been asked out by a boy but I didn’t like him, but Mary-Lou liked Alex Cheevey and he liked her and he showed alot of actions that he liked her.
My brother has his drivers perment and he wanted a car or money to buy a car for christmas but not anymore but Caral Ray bought a car(black, red seats) with the money he got from the annonamis person who gave him the money.
My mom won money before but not like Caral Ray first she only won 100 $ but Caral Ray won 5,000$, my mom knows who gave her the money, but Caral Ray is still wondering.
December 17th, 2006 at 10:24 am
While you made good connections, you have three random statements in your response. Your post needs to have a beginning, middle and end. Also - you need to check spelling! Misspelling a character’s name is unacceptable and any other words you are not sure about, you need to look up.